There was not any flow in the plot and ask people for their permission before taking pictures. The pictures were all okay, except for the last one as it was quite blur.
The first picture was fantastic taken using the technique of burst shot taking every single movements we did. The second picture... hmmm... I think Hao En is trying to express that Miss Seah loves to help people without letting us know that she is there for us? The third picture was HORRIBLE! IT WAS TOTALLY CRAP!
The good thing about the first photo is that the focus is in the middle of the photo. The bad thing about the first photo is that the photo is that the main character should be bigger. To improve on this photo, you should trim the photo. The good thing about the second photo is that the focus is in the middle of the photo and the main character in that photo is big enough. The bad thing about the first photo is that the photo is a bit blur. To improve on this photo, you should take the camera more firmly. You should also ask Miss Seah for permission on taking her photo and posting it on your blog. The good thing about the first photo is that the main character of the photo is in the middle of the photo and the main character in that photo is big enough. The bad thing about the first photo is that the photo is a too blur. To improve on this photo, you should take the camera more firmly. You should also ask Lincoln for his permission on taking his photo and posting it to your blog. Your story has no connections. -Christopher Nah
The pictures are not related to each other. The first picture should be enlarged so that we could see Hao En and Lincoln clearer. The second picture Miss Seah should turn around rather than looking at the teachers eating their meals and that is a distraction. The third picture was very blur and should try another picture than posting on the blog. Shamemi was also in the third picture so it is also a distraction.
The pictures were suppose to make up into a story =D but there was no relation. The first picture, it was very obvious that you are the goal keeper (good) But i could not tell where lincoln was kicking... it looked as if he was kicking the opposite direction and if he was, what are you blocking??? important point: Permission! if Ms Seah does not agree, shouldn't post it up... we should all respect her decision. the last picture was too blurry...
DAMN U!
ReplyDeleteThere was not any flow in the plot and ask people for their permission before taking pictures.
ReplyDeleteThe pictures were all okay, except for the last one as it was quite blur.
The first picture was fantastic taken using the technique of burst shot taking every single movements we did. The second picture... hmmm... I think Hao En is trying to express that Miss Seah loves to help people without letting us know that she is there for us? The third picture was HORRIBLE! IT WAS TOTALLY CRAP!
ReplyDeletethere isn't any story told in the pictures and lincoln mouth is moving when u taken it so it looks blurry
ReplyDeleteThe last picture was blur. There was no connection between the pictures.
ReplyDeleteWas there a need to have a connection? I never knew....
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ReplyDeleteThe good thing about the first photo is that the focus is in the middle of the photo. The bad thing about the first photo is that the photo is that the main character should be bigger. To improve on this photo, you should trim the photo.
ReplyDeleteThe good thing about the second photo is that the focus is in the middle of the photo and the main character in that photo is big enough. The bad thing about the first photo is that the photo is a bit blur. To improve on this photo, you should take the camera more firmly. You should also ask Miss Seah for permission on taking her photo and posting it on your blog.
The good thing about the first photo is that the main character of the photo is in the middle of the photo and the main character in that photo is big enough. The bad thing about the first photo is that the photo is a too blur. To improve on this photo, you should take the camera more firmly. You should also ask Lincoln for his permission on taking his photo and posting it to your blog.
Your story has no connections.
-Christopher Nah
The pictures are not related to each other. The first picture should be enlarged so that we could see Hao En and Lincoln clearer. The second picture Miss Seah should turn around rather than looking at the teachers eating their meals and that is a distraction. The third picture was very blur and should try another picture than posting on the blog. Shamemi was also in the third picture so it is also a distraction.
ReplyDeleteThe pictures were suppose to make up into a story =D but there was no relation.
ReplyDeleteThe first picture, it was very obvious that you are the goal keeper (good) But i could not tell where lincoln was kicking... it looked as if he was kicking the opposite direction and if he was, what are you blocking???
important point: Permission!
if Ms Seah does not agree, shouldn't post it up... we should all respect her decision.
the last picture was too blurry...
The pictures do not show any relationships. And we should respect others privacy, some of the pictures are also quite blurred.
ReplyDeleteThe pictures are nicely taken except for picture 2 because I feel that you should ask permission before you take any picture. Good job.
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